More Effective Writing


I've begun re-reading Steinbeck's "East Of Eden." I'd hoped to find a copy of "Grapes of Wrath" as it mines the Great Depression in a way few great American books do. I also believe that the "Grapes of Wrath" is essential reading these days and very appropriate for the times in which we live.

But I was unable to find a copy and settled upon "East Of Eden," a big, almost biblical, epic of a book. It's the story of the Hamilton and the Trask families, the cycle of life and death, living on and from the land and the main character of the book itself, the Salinas Valley in California. I believe it was Pearl Buck who wrote, "write what you know." And that is what Steinbeck does. If you've not read this book, do.

What makes Steinbeck's writing so agreeable is the action in his writing. Something is always happening, even when he's describing something as simple as flowers growing on a hillside. Four pages into the book he writes of California poppies:

"These too are a burning color--not orange, not gold, but if pure gold were liquid and could raise a cream, that golden cream might be like the color of the poppies."

Now, I've never seen a California poppy, but I damn sure know what one is like now. If you read the sentence closely you'll note that there are no adverbs and few adjectives. There isn't a single word in the sentence, or in the first several pages, anyone with a reading level above the Eight Grade would need a dictionary for, either. Besides, when you get into the nuts and bolts of the sentence it's really rather boring, no?

And yet the description lives. Why? Well, as any Freshman Comp textbook will tell you, the sentence lives in the verbs. A "burning" color? A liquid metal that "raises" a cream? And the extended metaphor of milk and cream, solid gold and that which is liquid? Give me spartan prose that lives any day over a bunch of words I barely know.

I know Steinbeck is out of fashion in the salons and uber-literate magazines of the East Coast, that Hemingway still rules the roost and Delillo, Roth and Updike are probably the most widely read in high-brow circles. But there is a reason Steinbeck won a Nobel Prize and a reason he's still read in Middle and High Schools across the country. One could do worse.

What are you reading these days?


Sean Paul Kelley April 18, 2009 - 1:04pm
( categories: Ruminations )

...I found to be many different things, and Steinbeck, even after 70 years, still pretty much covers the bases.

As for me, while it's nice to drive through (I enjoy the driving itself as much as seeing the sights), I'm happy to live where I do in Silicon Valley.

Good to see you're settling in and starting to enjoy yourself more, SP...

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"God gives men a brain and a penis, and only enough blood to run one at a time." -- Robin Williams

justadood April 18, 2009 - 1:55pm

Grapes of Wrath as a free e-book at this link Scroll down to the specific author and title. All of his writings appear at that site. Enjoy! I uploaded it to ensure there were no strings attached. The entire book is in Microsoft Word--saved it to my computer, then unzipped it. Gutenberg.org didn't have it because it's less than one hundred years old and hasn't as yet become public domain. Steinbeck remains one of my favourite authors. Let me know if you don't have a zipping utility; I could send it as an e-mail attachment.

canuck April 18, 2009 - 7:14pm

Steinbeck is a god, was so much fun to read his works while living there. Unfortunately (or not?) there isn't a lot of tuna fishing happening on Cannery Row these last few decades. He really captures the area in amazing, vibrant detail.

zot23 April 18, 2009 - 7:57pm

a re-read of Cannery Row as well as his take on King Arthur. Fashionable or not Steinbeck's voice is an American Classic...an interesting choice for one so far away.

"Lord! What Fools these Mortals be!"

Doug Richardson April 18, 2009 - 9:51pm

It's actually a type of buttercup, not a papaver. Small, flat, 4 wide petals. A pale canary yellow. Fragile, you can't put them in a vase or even grow them yourself: you just have to enjoy them on a hillside.

"Turning Japanese I think I'm Turning Japanese I really think so da-da-da det det det det" - The Vapors

Tonsure Wimple April 19, 2009 - 5:31am

not true, you can grow California Poppies yourself from seed. Like Ontario's provincial flower, the Trillium, it just refuses to transplant successfully.

Instructions on how to grow.

Caveat--to avoid the plant dying, seed and put in a permanent location.

Second caveat: In some locations, it can become invasive. Check to see if it does before buying seed.

canuck April 19, 2009 - 12:18pm

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